Please write your personal recount by your self
1 1. Choose one topic below! Write a Personal recount text individually based on the topic you have chosen.
a) My Bad Experience
b) My Nice Holiday
2. Elaborate your Personal recount as good as possible in terms of organize into generic structure of text (orientation, events and reorientation).
Deadline : August 30, 2014 (Midnight) please write your name and class.
Note : 1). Focus on specific participant
2) Used action verbs and simple past tense (V2). For example : was, were, spent, visited etc.
Example
BalasHapusName : Kartini tahir
My Bad Experience
I have an experience. I think, it was so bad in my life. It happened when I was in Senior high School in my classroom.
I came late and it was totally too late. I went to school at 8 o’clock. Actually, I came late because I helped my parents to prepare another food to sell in my kiosk. Then, arrived in classroom, the teacher asked me why I came late. He asked me to stand up in front the class until break time. Before I sat in my chair, I have to sing a song and write some another words “I am so sorry sir.” I was so shy
Finally, it was so bad experience. Based on my mistake, I never come late again. Hopefully it was the first and the last of my life.
Name : Kharisma Pertiwi
BalasHapusClass : X-IIS.1
I am on vacation to the island of Wakatobi with family and friends me.I leaves at 8:00 am, my family and friends boarded the plane we took AVIESTAR approximately 40 menit.sesampai we are there we are looking for a hotel to rest for us in Wakatobi. we did not forget to go to places of tourist attractions in Wakatobi, there are very beautiful people there are very nice and friendly, there we saw the tourists came, I was very happy holiday times hotel.Not I was already a week at Wakatobi. I can not bear to leave the island.
The story of my vacation this time. thank you
That's very nice story dear. Perhaps, pay attention to the sentence "Sesampai we are there we are looking for a hotel to rest for us in Wakatobi." You may say, "Arrived in there, we looked for a hotel and took a rest for us in Wakatobi.
BalasHapusLast holiday, my friends and I went camping on the mountain. We went to amarilis . The spot is near from our town. I is about 2 hours to get there. We choose amarilis because it is not too far from settlement.
BalasHapusWe prepared everything before going on camping. The boys prepared the tents, the girls prepared the food, and I checked the accommodations. We brought cooking utensils and the food from home, clothes, camera, guitar, etc. We went there by a car and a motorcycle for unwanted condition. We went there in the sunny morning and hoped no rain during camping.
On the first day, we sat up the tent on the spot near waterfall. The girls made the fence of the area but the boys took a bath on the river. Then, we cooked the food for the lunch, had lunch together, tried to fish in the river but we got a sandal.
On the second day, we had some activities. We went on hiking up the mountain, took some pictures in tea garden, and picked strawberry. The last night of our camping was so cold, we made a campfire, sang song together and told spooky stories which made us fear.
We had camping for about three days. On the last day, we packed everything we bought. we cleaned the area and made sure there was nothing left except our footprint. We didn’t took anything except took photos, we remembered that we must keep the nature, friendly with them and they will be friendly with us. We made a memory by taking photos together in front of a waterfall and then went home happily. We felt very tired.
Good story Izhatul, you have good explanation how to elaborate your pharagraph was so briefrly. However, please pay attention to your pharagraph, perhaps, the length of composition is about 100-150 words not to much dear and you have to focus on your pharagraph
HapusNew Year’s Eve 2014
BalasHapusOn new year’s eve 2014, my family and I celebrated it by watching the firework in my family house
The weather at that time was not so bright. But it did not dampen my spirit to see the moment that only happened once a year. My family and I left home at 10.30 pm. The distance from our house to the town was not far. On the way, we met with our neighbors who also wanted to spend the time to watch the fire work. About fifteen minutes, we arrived at the Town. The atmosphere was bustling with sellers. The food’s sellers and trumpet’s sellers were all busy serving customers. We did not forget to see the concert that night. Finally, the moment that we waited was arrived. People all together counted down ten to one. Then, various kind of the fireworks exploded in the air beautifully. I was recording the firework with my hand phone.
After all finished, we went home with unforgettable memories. I hope to watch the fireworks again next year.
It was so nice experience dear. You have a good instruction how to elaborate your idea to other words and try to use transition signal in your draft are very good to suppose your writing.It was simple and complete in your writing. Congratulation dear, Enjoy with your writing.. :)
HapusNAME : ABD IZHATUL MUKMININ
BalasHapusCLASS: X IS 1
NAME : SEPTIAWAN ROHIM
BalasHapusCLASS : X IS 1
Muh. Rifqi Al-Ikhzan
BalasHapusX IIS 1
My last Lebaran day was fabulous. I did a lot of enjoyable activities on the day. Though I didn’t go upstream (mudik), it was extremely fun.
First, I got up at five o’clock and did praying. Then, I ate no end of delicious food. There were opor, ketupat, and many more. I was almost full at that time. Mom cooked really well as there was no food left. After that, my family and I went to the mosque to do Idul Fitri pray. There, I met some old friends that rarely can be seen. They only came back to their village when Lebaran day came along. Next, we visited our family cemetery to pray for my grandmother who had passed away long time ago. I really missed grandma though I hadn’t ever seen her face directly. After going back to our house, we decided to take a rest for a while. Finally, we went to my aunt’s house and spent the rest of the day there.
I personally believed that Lebaran day was a special day for my family. On that day, we had time to meet and spend our day together. It was fabulous.
what's interesting experience dear! You have good explanation about your story such as how to support your idea also how to make coherence to each other words are very so briefly. Enjoy with your writing dear...............:) that's so challenging.
HapusHASLINA SARIHU
BalasHapusX IIS 1
On my holidays and my familiy ovtings at the beach Nambo. our activities there is swiming and eating lunch we brought how many hours later rushed to.
complete your draft dear
HapusNAME : Muh Jabal thoriq
BalasHapusCLAS : IS 1
My Holiday In Idul Fitri
In last Idul Fitri, I went to my grandmother's house, I went there with my family. Once there we continued to rest, and tomorrow morning we went to the recreation that was sigambal, it was a very beautiful waterfall.
To get there we had trouble because the visitors are very crowded so we were stuck in traffic long enough, it’s about 0.5 km. Upon arriving at our destination immediately find a place to sit cross-legged and put under on our luggage, then I change my clothes to take a shower under the waterfall splash. The scenery is very beautiful, so that we use to took pictures with my family.
After the shower and take pictures, my family and I took a break over lunch. And finally we decided to go home. During the journey back to my grandmother's house, we were stuck in traffic again. After several hours on the road we finally arrived at my grandmother's place.
My holiday experience was very enjoyable, and a wish to be able to do it again
very sweet story dear, you have clear instruction about your experience and your paragraph is coherence to each other. Congratulation! Enjoy with your writing :)
BalasHapusMy First Experience to Ride Motorcycle
BalasHapusOne day, when I was ten years old, my father bought an old motorcycle. That was " Honda 75". I think it was small light object and easy to ride it. I persuaded my father to teach me to ride " Honda 75 ". Firstly, my father refused my request and promised that he would teach me two or three years later, but I still whimpered. Finally, my father surrendered and promised to teach me.
He began to teach me riding the motorcycle around a field in my village. My father was very patient to give me some directions. I was very happy when I realized my ability to ride a motorcycle. " Yes, I can ".
One day later, when I was alone at home, I intended to try my riding ability. So, myself tried bravely. All ran fluently in the beginning, but when I was going back to my home and I must passed through a narrow slippery street, I got nervous. I lost my control and I fell to the ditch.
After that, I told my father about the last accident. I imagined my father would be angry and never let me ride again. But the reality is exactly on the contrary, my father was very proud of me. He just gave me some advices and since that accident, I got my father's permission to ride motorcycle.
NAME : RAKA ARYA PANGESTU
CLASS : XIIS 1
It was so challenging Raka. Your experience was so complecated. Soon after, your explanation are so clear. However. Please write until 100-150 words not to much dear. Then, please, focus your pharagraph such as make a brainstorming in order to make easy to write and you have to pay attention to your event perhaps you can make one pharapraph. In short, there are three pharagraph, orientation, event and re-orientation, OK :)
HapusMy Family Vacation Together
BalasHapusLast holiday, I went to my grandparents house with my father, my mother, and my brother. Each holiday comes, my family never forget my grandfather to come home.
Once the home of my grandfather, our family went to the beach. The journey from home to the beach toronipa my grandfather very much and certainly not a little time consuming.
While in the journey, my brother and I listen to music. While listening to music, we also sing songs that we hear. Having had an hour drive, we also get our place of destination is Toronipa Beach.
Once up, we also immediately undressing. After that we all ran kepantai, we berlumba because of who he was meant to last until the monkey hahahah. We also play around at the beach. I'm playing at the beach too much, so I was warned to be careful so as not to drown.
After half an hour, we also dberitahu to be rushed because it was afternoon, let alone a return trip must take a long time. After arriving home, we were all very tired. That's the story of my vacation, it was a very fun holiday. ~ End ~
Name: Hensrony Rompas
Class: X-IIS 1
It's Not bad dear. i can be seen your passion in writing. Perhaps pay attention to your draft and make a brainstorming before writing. Besides, you also use transition signal in other to make a unity in your pharagraph. I Like it. Because you express by our own words dear. Good Job! Enjoy with your writing. perhaps you cann repair your draft..:)
HapusLast Holiday I Got Really Fantastic Memories
BalasHapusI Went To My Grandpa House In Unaaha.It Tooks About 1 Hour Driving From Kendari To Unaaha,In Unaaha I And My Family Go To Fishing In My Grandpa Field,The Field Have Many Large Pond,It's Just Like A Fish Farm,We Got Many Fish (Yeah Maybe It's Strange If We Just Got A Few Fish Because We Fishing On Fish Farm)
After That I Take The Fish To My Grandpa House To Cook It,Its Delicous Maybe Because Its A Fresh Fish, And The Night Of It I Star To Play Fireworks Its Soo Beatiful.
In The Morning I Go Home With My Family Maybe Its Just A Day But Still I Will Not Forget It
Well Thats My Holiday
Thanks For Reading It ^^
Name:Andi Fahri Makbul
Class:X IIS 1
Lol Forgot (,) In The Middle Of Family And Maybe XD
Hapuswell, Fahry, not bad dear, Please, pay attention to the verb. Be carefull. You have to use past simple dear. i found some un grammatical in your draft for instead, "It Tooks" It's unappropriate dear you may use " It took...." Besides, the word, "In Unaaha I And My Family" is ungrammatical. You may say, In unaha, my famili and I ...." However. I appreciate with your draft dear. keep going and exercise :)
HapusKomentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
BalasHapusLast summer,i and my family went to watubangga beach,i had many experiences during the vacation.
BalasHapusFirst, I prepared the items I would take it to the beach like a shirt, pants and the food. after that, all my items already packed, I carry my stuff to the car. after all the items have been loaded, I and my family went to watubangga beach,a trip to watubangga beach takes 45 minutes,during my trip to beach i entertai my self by listening to the song.
After waiting for a long time,finally i and my family arrived in watubangga beach.After Parked a car i brought my items to the edge of the beach.before i swam i ate it first.after ate i ran to the beach for swam.in the beach i search a starfish,after i tired because walking around the beach i rinsed my body with fresh water.after then i ready to came back to home.
I was very tired,but i also feel very happy because i can visit the beatiful beaches.
NAME : AHMAD YUSRIL TRIPUTRA
CLASS : X IIS 1
Sounds good dear, Please pay attention to your organisation. If you said, I and my family is not appropriate. it would be better you used My family and I. Then, pay attention to the verb for example "carry" you may said. carried dear. :) Not bad, Go ahead!
HapusGoing to Johar Market
BalasHapusMy mother and I went shopping to Johar Market last Sunday. We took a bus at 8 a.m. and got there at 10 a.m.
We went to the fruit section. We bought two kilograms of guavas and three papayas. After that, we went to the fish section to buy two kilograms of fresh fish. Then we went to the fashion shop to buy dresses for my sister.
Pasar Johar was very hot at that time. I felt so thirsty, so I asked my mother to have some drink at a small food stall nearby.
We went home at 11 a.m. by a taxi because we had to go to our family in Semarang.
Sofyan Isra J.
X-IIS 1
Nice Sofyan :) So simple but it very clear. pay attention to the first sentence, perhaps, you put the word, : Last Sunday" at the first. for example, "Last sunday, My mother and I went shopping to Johar Market." After that, you can use transition signal so that your draft is coherence. Nice. Keep going dear!
BalasHapusvacation to the beach toronipa.
BalasHapus2 semester break has started, I precisely ninth grade. I and my family went to visit Toronipa beach. Family took me a trip to the beach, I love it because the first time I went to the beach.
Just arrived at the beach there is a very shocking incident. There was a mother with her child who nearly drowned while swimming in the sea. I was scared, but eventually the fear is gone and we continue to walk along the beach while looking at the sea and the waves around.
It's beautiful scenery that surrounds the beach. Once satisfied playing then my family and I stopped by the house to eat that are around the coast. Wow, I am surprised that my family ordered grilled fish menu is very large. We ate together until I was stuffed and finished our meal home.
I'm happy because there are a lot of experiences that I can that day. Thank you Dad, Mom. A few
Name : Rusman Triadi
Kelas : X.IIS.1
Interesting experience rusman :) Please, pay attention to the verb also you have to use past simple in your draf........Ok......:) nice and keep going dear.
Hapusto the beach with family
BalasHapusEid when we went to the beach with the family, and we are left with the car, bus and we started walking. when we singga beritsrahat d tenga also happened to be our way to see our shop and buy a drink. we beritsrahat beberpa hours, then our way again.
we see pemendangan beautiful, when I saw people fall. and we stopped to help him, and we go again, not in rasah far we've arrived, then our family turung of the car, and we all baths. I see a very beautiful coral, and my sister saw dolphins he was very happy, so is my father, very happy to see dolphins, while a few hours, we ride, and we went home
name: andrian
class: x iis 1
Andrian :) see your topic, maybe you can complete your title for example, "Went to the beach with family." Next, similar with your friends you have to use past simple in your draft and also make a brainstorming before starting to write so that you will be easy to write. Go ahead :) dear..
HapusHoliday Story Eid 2014
BalasHapusThe first day of my holiday preparations prepare for the celebration of the upcoming Eid. Followed the next day I became still busy with preparing for Eid clothes, Eid making cookies, clean - clean the house, because I was not going home kemana- ADVISED where.
My sister and my cousins came from Makassar to Kendari. The house was so full and crowded but happy. This year all full brothers came to Kendari as 2 days after the feast day there will be a "Marriage Feast" my uncle and "Circumcision" my cousin. night July 27, 2014 families have already started preparing for the feast day tomorrow, but it turns out according to the decision that the Minister of Religion 1 Syawal falls on July 28, 2014, so it automatically continues fasting tomorrow.
Two full days of my uncle's house and formed friendships to nearby neighbors throughout the city. Tired of course, especially some after Eid arrives there is always a flurry of relentless, because all helped prepare 2 event to be held by my large family. Funny thing is at my cousin's wedding, my job is as a receptionist. imagine from the title until the show started in completed any I must remain standby at the entrance. This continues to show the circumcision of my cousin. Remains as the last event I acted as receptionists and distribute souvenirs. Tired not playing. Still felt tired the next day. But I have to start preparing for school on August 4, 2014.
Name : Marcha Reskiani M
Class : X IIS 1
Marsha :) It was so challenging with you experience dear....:). Please, using transition signal so that you draft is coherence to another pharagraph. For example, in adition, furthermore, and so on perhaps, you can open the material in my blog....:) Good Luck
HapusName : Haslina Sarihu
BalasHapusClass : X IIS 1
Yesterday exact same day of the week I was invited to my cousin sister to the streets to law's house in Unaaha. I actually do not want to come because I have a habit carsick, so I was not able to climb the vehicle for much travel time
because it continues in the same forced my older cousin, in the end I followed my cousin sister invitation, my cousin said carsick habits can be eliminated if the habit. So I will get used to travel far.
Name: NABILA SAFA SALZABILLAH
BalasHapusClass: X IIS 1
=>Holiday In Bali<=
Holiday fun. Me and my family vacation to Bali. There I stay at a hotel behind which there is Kuta beach, wah nice! After that I and my family walk to Ubud that is located far away from where we were staying. In Ubud there is a zoo there are only monkeys all.
Haha, as we entered me and my sister to be climbed monkey because we brought bread and bread was forced to give. Done from Ubud we stepped into Tanjung Benoa, there I saw people being daiving,jet ski,just a lot deh! It's just, I can not get to the Island Turtle. Returning from there my family and I went straight to the hotel where you stay.
Hemm our second day in Bali. I and my family are planning a shower-bat swimming pond continue to see the beauty of Kuta beach. Yeah, I finished bathing pond and sister ride bikes a round at the beach of Kuta. Once completed wee too into hotel room.
The third day in Bali, this last day we went for a walk because tomorrow morning we will be back in Kendari city. And before going in Kendari, we also went to the land for clothes shopping.
That's my vacation with my family in the new year. All and thank you!
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
BalasHapusLast year, my family and I went to Jogja. We visited many places.First, we visited Parangtritis beach. The sun shone brightly and the scenery was very beautiful there. We felt the wind blew across to us. We also saw a lot of people in that beach. There werw many birds flew in the sky. Also, there were many sellers who sold many kinds of souvenirs. Second, we visited Gembira Loka Zoo. We saw many kinds of animals there such as monkeys, tigers, crocodiles, snakes, etc. We looked around in that Zoo, and also took pictures of those animals. Then, we felt hungry, so we went to a restaurant. As soon as we finished our lunc, we decided to go home.
BalasHapusFor me, that was a beautiful day though I could not visit Malioboro. we really enjoyed it, and I hope I could visit Jogja again.
Andi sri resky your draft is so clearly dear. It is very good, simple and good instruction. And also, you put transition signal in your draft. Congratulation :) Keep going dear :)
HapusNAME: MUH. ADITYA PERDANA
BalasHapusCLASS: X.ISS 1
Last week was a terrible day for me . My cousin and I were playing football infront of the house to spend time with us . First , it was really fun until I kicked the ball too strong , so the ball leaded me to the window and broke the window . When we want to escape , all of a sudden we all heard a loud voice . After that , the owner of the house came out of the fence , he yelled at us . We are very afraid of her , but we do not know what to do . Then , one of my cousins told us to run , we all ran , and suddenly we heard the sound of skin . Then we know that homeowners allow dogs to chase us . And we were struggling to run as fast as her as we can. But , I fell down so the dog managed to capture me and bit my leg . It really hurts me . Then the dog ran back into the house . My cousin took me to the doctor and told my parents . In the end, the doctor said that I was exposed to rabies . Then I was hospitalized for one week more . that's a terrible day of the week for me , may not happen to me again in his next week Sunday
Muh. aditya perrdana your draft is good. Good instruction, you have express some of transition signal so that your pharagraph is coherence. However, One of sentence is not appropriate such as "My cousin and I "were playing" football infront of the house to spend time with us." You may say, My cousin and I played football in front of the house to spend the time...." Go ahead dear.:) enjoy with your writing
HapusOne day when Eid has come, I am busy with activities to welcome Eid
BalasHapusbefore Eid my family and I prepare a dish for Eid
the day started in the morning my family and I began to go to the mosque to perform the Eid prayer together, after running the worship. me and family
large mutual apology, to others also
The next day my family and I prepare to go home preparation grandmother.
it takes time to get there for 6 hours, which passes through the jungle, and mountains, and it was very enjoyable
I went there with my family. Once there we continued to rest and the next day we visited relatives who lived not far from my grandmother's house
after completion of visiting relatives, my family and I come home grandmother,
I was at home, my grandmother for three days
and on the third day, we decided to go home. During the journey to return to my grandmother's house, we had to congestion again. After several hours on the road we finally arrived at my grandma's place.
My holiday experience was very pleasant, and wishing it to be able to repeat it again ...!
a day of my holiday with my family we are looking surabaya.but arriving home address but we lost my cousin wa supposed mountain sar i marines.marine golf 7 in fact 1 event housing complex that i will not forget
BalasHapusHoliday surabaya
BalasHapusNAME :PUTRI AQIILA FADILILLAH
CLASS :X IIS-I
a day of my holiday with my familiy to surabaya where i met my cousins for two years because i didnot meet them.i dis invited to walk to the zoo,water park,amazone,and others.and in the moorning i was invited to carfeour streets,royal shooping my heart felt happy because i was not a memorable holiday experience
NAME : WD. ALMIRA PRAHADITA .A
BalasHapusCLASS : X IIS 1
"MY HOLIDAY IN HARRI LAND"
Last week, my family and I went to Harry Land. We used by car. Then, we started at 8 a.m. Before we passed in the land, we went formerly in the quay for rent a speadboat. in arrived from quay to Harri Land for 15 minutes. After that, we arrived in there at 9.30 a.m. My family and I hurried up to put a clothes. nwxt, I tried to diving with my father. He was very skilled especially in diving. Besides, my family and I went up on the surface for lunch such as foods and drinks. it was so delicious.
Yeayy!! This is my nice hoiday in my life mom...:)
Sorry for came late to post my draft .
NAME : ALMA ANUGRAH
BalasHapusCLASS : X IIS 1
MY NICE EXPERIENCE
One day, I and my family want to vacation planning to Makassar precisely at my grandmother's house. The arrival in Makassar, my family and I boarded a taxi from the airport to the grandmother's house. when on my way to see some public places such as Malls, etc, Losari. when I got home my grandma hugged grandmother. Afternoon, my brother and I were entered by my uncle went into a Trance Studio. After there, long enough eventually, we got home. It was late at night. when I got home I went straight to sleep.
NAME : RINDINIA AFUARISTY A.
BalasHapusCLASS : X IIS 1
Went to Toronipa Beach
One day, my friend and I went to toronipa beach. I went there with my family. when I got there, I immediately ran to the cottage. cottage there for the turn. After a few minutes, i was on the call by my mother to eat. After I eat to immediately return a shower after a few hours go home.